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Scarlets Legacy

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(i challenge you to listen to www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ua9_R0…, and read this)

my eyes widened..my mouth agape but unable to scream. there she stood in front of me, a porcelain covered hand skewered through her midriff. a sickening gurgle choked up from her throat, lips the colour of scarlet as blood began to ooze from her. i couldn't make a sound..i was watching her die!!!!! it seemed to be happening in slow motion...those grey eyes ..they moved to look at me. i watched the light fade from them as a streak of blood zig zagged down her forhead.. a spurt erupted from her lips and soaked my face and chest..it was then i found my voice.
"NOOOOOO!!!!" i screamed as loud as i could, a second long, spindly arm thumping my chest and knocking me down. my arms reached for her as i fell..and i watched her body crumple like paper with a disgusting crack as this huge doll ripped her hand from my beloved..
i felt my eyes sting, i couldn't swallow .. all i could do was crawl to her and hold her bleeding body. her head lolled in my arms as i shook her. "don't go..!! oh god no ..don't leave me.. please don't leave me!!" i cried. through my tears..i could barely see her. finally her head dropped limp..and i was alone in this wretched place again ..everything i love once again stolen away ..i stood on shaking legs.. and took her axe in my hand. ..it was up to me to fight her demon..to save my beautiful girls soul. i stood facing her nightmare .. with a cracked porcelain smile and monstrous teeth..
i had to end this.

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an alternate version of the climax of my story. you see, i viewed my ex girlfriend like a beautiful porcelain doll.. she had skin like porcelain and such beautiful curly blonde hair and the bluest eyes so big and beautifully lashed. her nose was like a little button, curved like a dolly. and her lips, full and pink like the most beautiful rose.. but inside...
she was selfish and vain, thought only of herself. she was vindictive, controlling..wanting nothing but expensive gifts and princess treatment. ...she treated others as though they were beneath her and those who opposed her opinions felt her wrath. i see her in my story mutating into a scarlet type monster..and to put her memory to rest, i have to kill her. i succeed in the story but i liked the idea of her looking directly into murphy's eyes before she dies, the memory of her one true love too strong to overcome..and therefore killed her in the end.
call it a "bad ending" XD if you will.
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Pavlinka14's avatar
veeery good worka